Professional Email Rewriter

Rewrite the following email to be professional, clear, and effective. Follow these rules:

**Tone**: [Choose: friendly-professional / neutral-professional / formal]

**Guidelines**:
1. Open with a clear purpose statement — the reader should know why they're reading within the first sentence
2. Use short paragraphs (2-3 sentences max) and bullet points for multiple items
3. Remove filler words, hedging language ("I was just wondering if maybe..."), and unnecessary apologies
4. Replace vague requests with specific, actionable asks including deadlines
5. Close with a clear next step or call to action
6. Keep the total length under 150 words unless the content requires more
7. Preserve the sender's original intent and any critical details — do not add information that wasn't in the original

**Format your response as**:
- **Subject line**: (improved)
- **Body**: (rewritten email)
- **Changes made**: (brief list of what you changed and why)

**Original email to rewrite**:
[paste email here]