Improve This Landing Page Copy

Improve this landing page copy for better conversions.

**My current copy:**
[Paste your landing page text here]

**Optimize for:**
- Stronger headline (benefit-driven, under 10 words)
- Clearer value proposition (what's in it for the reader?)
- Benefits over features
- Social proof (suggest where to add testimonials/numbers)
- Stronger CTA (action-oriented, specific)
- Reduced friction (address objections)
- Better scannability (shorter paragraphs, bullet points)

**Provide:**
1. The improved copy (ready to use)
2. 3-5 bullet points explaining what you changed and why